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(C) 2009 David B. Combs

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I really like where this shot is going :)
As far as the lighting, this picture is excellent; the warm light coming from the windows, with the lensflares; the colder, more unnatural-feeling light coming from behind the house, slightly illuminating the underside of the roof; and of course those great lights in the sky. There are a few things I would suggest, however, relating to composition. Overall, the image seems to be at an angle, not quite level, and you might try rotating it a bit. Also, the right-hand side seems rather cramped, with unnatural and slightly unappealing angles... try to pay attention to how each individual aspect affects the image in future photos :) Hehe, the picture is also rather pixelated, but there is not much you can do about that without buying a better camera, and I am in the same boat there ^^;
Very nice capture, you were very lucky to have such a scene laid out before you :)
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Wow thats wonderful.

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very nice

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